Saturday, 16 May 2015

Creative Writing Series 3




3.     Identical twins, a party invitation, and a locked closet.

It wouldn’t be long now. The party had started at eight and most of the guests had arrived but he said he would be here and she trusted him.

Her parents were out of town visiting her grandfather for a few days so while they were gone she decided to throw a party. Most of those who were here already were drunk and had already started the drinking games but Sammi waited pacing the tiled kitchen floor for the doorbell to ring.

By ten she had almost given up when the familiar chime of the door went.

“Where have you been?” She demanded
“Sorry, I’m late. I had to pick my brother up at the airport. I brought him along. Hope you don’t mind.”
Damon breezed past her kissing her on the cheek going to join the other guests in their games. She opened her mouth to protest and immediately closed it when she saw a perfect replica of her crush standing in the doorway looking more submissive than she was sure Damon had ever been in his life.
“Hi, I’m Jason. It’s nice to meet you. Sorry about my brother.”

She hadn’t known Damon even had a brother let alone an identical twin. She gestured for him to come in not trusting herself to speak.

As Sammi followed the boys into the living room where the other guests had started a game of truth or dare. When Sammi sat down the bottle span around to face her and her best friend Clarisse smirked as she picked Dare.
“I dare you to spent seven minutes in heaven with someone of my choice blindfolded. When you leave you have to guess who it was.”

Sammi knew her best friend would pick one of the twins and dreaded having to distinguish between the two.

Sunday, 3 May 2015

Theatre Trip - Normal Madness

Last night I went to go and see a performance of Normal Madness by Fiona Geddes. It was not only written by Fiona Geddes but she also performed the piece. I attended the show at the Paisley Arts Centre and from the blurb the performance looked to be quite interesting. Normal Madness is a one women portrayal of a young woman's life living with her mother who has been diagnosed with schizo-affective disorder. It looks at the effect which her mother's disorder has on the young woman's life.

Having worked as a carer for three years and having cared for someone with schizophrenia I can say that Fiona has really done her research into the subject of mental illness and is touchingly true to life. There was hardly a single person watching the performance who did not leave with tears in their eyes at this heart-warming story. Despite this the story is very funny at times and is quite light-hearted at the beginning, getting more and more heartbreaking as it goes on.

Whether or not you have been affected by schizophrenia or not, I believe that anyone who has ever cared for a relative with any condition, mental or physical, will be able to empathize with Kirsty's story. Many of the issues surrounding caring which affects Kirsty in the play, I have seen affect the families of those I have cared for. From dealing with advance statements to the controversial matter of having children with an increased risk of the condition, these issues are portrayed fairly and truthfully.

When the character Kirsty entered her clothing and relaxed manner made me think that she was a member of the audience. She began with wearing a cardigan over two tops and jeans. One of the tops was used to break the ice with a joke while the cardigan was put on and taken off throughout the performance. This casual clothing set the tone for the piece. A relaxed casual atmosphere which added to the integrity of the performance and made it truly believable. Talking to audience members afterwards some of them express that they found it hard to distinguish what was acting and what was real.

Music was used as a tool to show the audience flashbacks to the mother’s past. As the performance was built around just one performer this helped distinguish when she was portraying Kirsty and when she was portraying Kirsty’s mother. The flashbacks were mostly set in a caravan resort and so nostalgic almost carnival like music was used in addition to sound effects of crowds, waves crashing and other sounds associated with a holiday resort. This was in contrast to the rest of the piece which was quite minimalistic.

The only sound effects used outside of the flashbacks was Kirsty’s phone ringing. As most of the piece was dialogue between Kirsty and the audience in an anecdotal style this broke up the piece in a way which made it seem as if it was happening in real time as Kirsty’s mother was interjecting with phone calls to her daughter during Kirsty’s storytelling.

Lighting was widely used to differentiate between when Kirsty addressed the audience and when other characters were portrayed. When three spotlights were used on the stage this showed that Fiona was switching between the characters of the doctors. When more complex lighting states were used this set the landscape for the flashbacks to the mother’s past. Darker lighting states were brought into play in the flashbacks to represent the mother’s declining mental state. Overall the lighting was quite subtle. When Kirsty addressed the audience the lighting was brought up almost as if the house lights were on. This put Kirsty and the audience on equal ground and helped to set up the realism of the story she was telling.

The set was very minimalistic with just a chair on a raised tilted platform with a black background. This provides a blank canvas which the audience can imagine the changing setting of the flashbacks, the doctor's offices and the theatre itself. Keeping the stage with minimal set increased the realism of Kirsty being there to tell her story to the audience which increases the audience's connection with Kirsty.

All props used in the show were brought onto the stage in a handbag by Kirsty. Props used were Kirsty's phone, letters and a bottle of water. These things are the type of items which a woman would carry around with her in her bag on a daily basis which added to the authenticity of the story.

All of these elements came together very well to create an amazingly heart-rending story which is astonishingly  funny at times but extremely well researched and written. This sweet anecdotally told story encapsulates so much in just under a hour long. It is definitely worth going to see and I highly recommend it.

http://www.kidder.org.uk/normalmadness/

Saturday, 2 May 2015

Creative Writing Series 2



2.     A taxi, an old enemy, and Valentine's Day.

Valentine’s Day was Leo’s least favourite day of the year. Lovey-dovey couples everywhere showing off the extent of their love for one another. It was sickening. He hadn’t a girlfriend. He didn’t need one. With a girlfriend came the nagging and the disgusting PDA’s and worst of all the need to make romantic displays especially on days like today. Yes, he was getting off lightly.

Even his favourite local tea shop, who served the especially delicious chocolate cake and the amazing scones, where he spent his breaks between lectures had been infected with it. Couples taking up all the tables. Streamers and paper hearts covering the place which before had a lovely vintage appeal with an old nineteen twenties style.

Whoever decided that red was to be the colour of love anyway? To Leo, red was the colour of those old musty leather-bound books that his grandmother kept in her bookshelf. Contained within those books, that was true romance.

That kind of romance was something he could be interested in. Instead of romance that’s only end was to get into each other’s pants. Having a girlfriend he actually liked and not just someone to define himself by.

He finally managed to find someplace to sit in the busy tea room when he saw her. She was stepping out of a taxi with her boyfriend holding the door open for her. They couldn’t have picked somewhere else to eat?

Lilith was his step sister. Her father had married his mother when they were sixteen. With their parents away working a lot he was the one who had to suffer her.

How long had she been with this one? He wondered. She usually had a new boyfriend every week or so. Each one thinking they were special. Until she grew bored of them that is.

He tried to avoid her gaze. But she found him anyway. She led her newest companion over to the table seated opposite him which just happened to be the only free table available.